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GURRRRLS SHOULD I FINISH THIS

 

IT SHOULD SOUND BETTER NECAUSE I JUST SPENT 2 HOURS MASTERING IT.

 

The first verse is sorta bland, its not done either obviously. But if you guys have any suggestions you want me to incorporate, this is the last chance

 

it was sooooo shittty b4 girls im sorry cry`1 

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I absolutely love everything from the first chorus on.

I don't really like how you layered the rap in at that spot, but that may just be because I hate the rap in general. 

Overall, I think you should finish it because it sounds really good.

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I really like this it's so cute brit13

Only thing is I'm not sure about how the rap fades in? Maybe less of a fade?

And alongwith/instead of Brit's sparse vocals behind the rap would it be possible to insert some of her ad libs/vocal rifts?

I know we don't have the stems for MM atm but taking them from another song might work.

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22 hours ago, The Black Parade said:

could be less rapid jj2 just a smidge jj2 

 

and add the MM&I part jj2 

 

22 hours ago, Addi said:

I absolutely love everything from the first chorus on.

I don't really like how you layered the rap in at that spot, but that may just be because I hate the rap in general. 

Overall, I think you should finish it because it sounds really good.

 

21 hours ago, Living Dead Boy said:

I really like this it's so cute brit13

Only thing is I'm not sure about how the rap fades in? Maybe less of a fade?

And alongwith/instead of Brit's sparse vocals behind the rap would it be possible to insert some of her ad libs/vocal rifts?

I know we don't have the stems for MM atm but taking them from another song might work.

Okay. I took all of your advice and I have a final version. 

 

Made the verses less rapid

took out g easy 

added more vocal shots and changes 

 

I hope you guys like it. It's rendering now. :)

 

EDIT. UPLOADED! 

 

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6 hours ago, @justysuxx said:

 

 

Okay. I took all of your advice and I have a final version. 

 

Made the verses less rapid

took out g easy 

added more vocal shots and changes 

 

I hope you guys like it. It's rendering now. :)

 

EDIT. UPLOADED! 

 

Keep it trash1 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

jk snatch my weave ny1 

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